Signe (
oxoniensis.livejournal.com
) wrote
in
out_there
2003-07-09 12:18 am (UTC)
no subject
Another wow section. You’ve got the confusion and the hurt and frustration spot on. It feels as though we’re right inside Josh’s head.
You provide just enough detail so that we know where we are, without distracting from the conversation and the way Josh is feeling.
Looking forward to the next section.
(
2 comments
)
Post a comment in response:
From:
Anonymous
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
OpenID
Identity URL:
Log in?
Dreamwidth account
Account name
Password
Log in?
If you don't have an account you can
create one now
.
Subject
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
Formatting type
Casual HTML
Markdown
Raw HTML
Rich Text Editor
Message
[
Home
|
Post Entry
|
Log in
|
Search
|
Browse Options
|
Site Map
]
no subject
You provide just enough detail so that we know where we are, without distracting from the conversation and the way Josh is feeling.
Looking forward to the next section.