*beams* Thank you. I was worried because it was written out at the conference in little dribs and drabs...

It feels as though we’re right inside Josh’s head.


Yay! It's a nice place to visit, but I wouldn't want to live there. *bg*

Looking forward to the next section.

Thanks. Hmmm... I need to work on it. Smut isn't my strong suit.

I'm thinking my best bet would be to have a look over some of the authors whose sex scenes I like, and then try to work out why...

Thanks for the encouragement. It's much appreciated.