I liked this. I don't really know anything about WW, but this was really well written and I got a feel for each of the characters, even without knowing them beforehand, and that's always the sign of a good fic.

*beams* Thank you.

There's a sort of freedom in this, in the beginning especially, perhaps not so much flying as having made it to the top of a very tall mountain, and finally looking out across the world. And then the rest of the climbing party glances around and grins, and walks away; and you're left staring after them. Alone and the world before you.

Wow. That's a perfect way of describing it. I'm glad that the feeling of the piece came through so strongly.

I really liked the last line.

Thanks again! I really appreciated your comments.