I like Dan playing the babysitter role to give Casey some free time.
Your writing really seems to suit Sports Night. I like the intelligent & articulate dialogue:
"There's a couple things you've got to get straight," Dan said firmly, turning to Casey. "I slept with an old flame. I am not the first, only or last person to do so. Regardless of what you may personally believe about the world's moral and sexual codes, it actually happens pretty often."
"And you've got to stop talking about 'it' as if I'm shooting up cocaine. It's sex, Casey. It's not fatal or destructive behaviour."
"I would have thought it was the default decision." Dan waved his hand dismissively. "Unless you're currently dating, you are, by extension, not dating. It shouldn't be something you need to discuss to make sure that you're not."
Maybe you're planning to change them in the final version, but I'm enjoying reading fanfic with Australian spellings for once!
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Your writing really seems to suit Sports Night. I like the intelligent & articulate dialogue:
"There's a couple things you've got to get straight," Dan said firmly, turning to Casey. "I slept with an old flame. I am not the first, only or last person to do so. Regardless of what you may personally believe about the world's moral and sexual codes, it actually happens pretty often."
"And you've got to stop talking about 'it' as if I'm shooting up cocaine. It's sex, Casey. It's not fatal or destructive behaviour."
"I would have thought it was the default decision." Dan waved his hand dismissively. "Unless you're currently dating, you are, by extension, not dating. It shouldn't be something you need to discuss to make sure that you're not."
Maybe you're planning to change them in the final version, but I'm enjoying reading fanfic with Australian spellings for once!