ext_1438 ([identity profile] mecurtin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] out_there 2004-05-01 09:03 am (UTC)

I love your procrastination

You are doing an absolutely *aces* job at "Show, Don't Tell" here.

It was great for the show and great for ratings, but Casey was always relieved when normal-Danny returned. He missed being able to laugh, and no-one made him laugh as much as Danny.

-- this *shows* us how much Casey loves Danny. (Yo, Casey! Clue bus for you!)

Dana talking about Natalie *shows* us what Danny is feeling, shows us one of the ways love looks.

And the kissing? Well, that *shows* me how much you rock! And it should *show* you how to reduce me to a puddle of pulsing goo.

*re-reads, pulses*


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