It's hard for me, with few exeptions, to really see SN in anything doesn't bring the funny. But that makes it work.

Thank you. I understand your issues with that. Even when the guys are hurting and being bitchy, they're still funny.

My concern was the lack of dialogue. For me, SN is a show all about the dialogue, the rhythm and flow of the words, so it's hard to try to write a fic that's basically silent and make it still feel like the SN characters we know and love.