Besides, there's the whole show vs. tell thing.

Yeah, my only concern is that so far, all of the flashbacks have been a description of what Dan's literally telling Abby. Hence, if Dan wouldn't tell Abby that... it shouldn't be there, I don't think.

Yeah. I've got Casey and Dan making out in the back of my head, all high-school-esque sexual desperation, and I'm not sure how to write it.

If you do it in a conversation, it'll just make us (or maybe just me) wanna see what actually happened.

Actually, that's a really good point. Hmmm...