Oh wow. Rodney is of course beyond all things beautiful in his bumbling, frenetic, genius way. However, your John here is gorgeous in the way he is intangible all the time, but still always there. Especially in the first part - he is just there all the time. He just shuts down and fades out so fast your head spins; mine as well as Rodney's. The dialogue was a joy to behold (and laugh at: the 'me, you simpering idiot' just rules the world) and well, so were the descriptions. Every dance hall I have ever been in is like that. Multa gracias..
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Rodney is of course beyond all things beautiful in his bumbling, frenetic, genius way. However, your John here is gorgeous in the way he is intangible all the time, but still always there. Especially in the first part - he is just there all the time. He just shuts down and fades out so fast your head spins; mine as well as Rodney's.
The dialogue was a joy to behold (and laugh at: the 'me, you simpering idiot' just rules the world) and well, so were the descriptions. Every dance hall I have ever been in is like that.
Multa gracias..