I waited until the end to comment because I HAD to read them all! This was simply awesome. I love how you wrote the conflict between Matt and Mrs. Suresh and Mohinder and his mom. And poor Matt! Mohinder needed to give him a hug after the poor man got shot.

I especially like how Matt and Mohinder's relationship played it. It was subtly affectionate, just enough to make you go "awww" without going overboard.

This was great! Now I think you should do "Matt's Mom". Just a thought. :D