This is absolutely gorgeous. Your voices are so skilled, I can absolutely hear everyone speaking, saying these words, especially in that last scene. I love Jack's inner monologue, how casual and unashamed he is about sex, but how you still show us that this developing thing with Ianto means more. I love Ianto taking charge, constantly surprising Jack, and the times he breaks out of the careful, mild-mannered form he always shows people. His reason for wanting Tosh to survive made my chest ache. Jack's concerns about Gwen and Owen were also a really great touch. Gorgeous writing all around.