Absolutely one of the best, hottest, most realistic TW fics I have ever read. Seriously: really good job!

I love the idea that Jack has fantasized about riding Ianto. It absolutely fits the dynamic that I think they have. Even so, I was as surprised as Ianto (and very pleased, although probably not as pleased as he) when Jack's hands went where they did. Jack's fingers plus Ianto's fingers? NNNGGGGGGHHHH. I completely lose the ability to use vowels.