that's terrific! i'm not great at doing good critical analysis of fiction, but i know excellent writing when it beats me over the head and makes me read it all in one sitting when all i originally intended to do was casually peruse an lj. i love au-based jack/ianto, and this was supurb. the pacing was terrific, the phrasing was witty without being over-glib, and both jack and ianto (and everyone mentioned, really) were delightfully in character.

i really enjoyed it!