JAck's vulnerability is superb, I love how Ianto is still Ianto while also seeming so incredibly young and the fact that you got plenty of intimacy into it without going anywhere near gratuity.
*beams* I'm so glad that worked. In a story like this, I figured you'd need to feel for both Jack and Ianto, to feel that there was some threat to each of them (only emotional for Jack, but given that he can't die, emotions are his biggest weakness). I was worried that Ianto might seem too young, but he is young. 23-24 seems old and mature when you're living through it, but looking back, you realise how terribly young that is.
Also, your username = awesome
Heh. Thanks. It's... one of those things that seemed incredibly cool at 15, and I'm too lazy to learn to type in new logins, so it's followed me from that first email account, to MBTV, to LJ.
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*beams* I'm so glad that worked. In a story like this, I figured you'd need to feel for both Jack and Ianto, to feel that there was some threat to each of them (only emotional for Jack, but given that he can't die, emotions are his biggest weakness). I was worried that Ianto might seem too young, but he is young. 23-24 seems old and mature when you're living through it, but looking back, you realise how terribly young that is.
Also, your username = awesome
Heh. Thanks. It's... one of those things that seemed incredibly cool at 15, and I'm too lazy to learn to type in new logins, so it's followed me from that first email account, to MBTV, to LJ.