Aw, you're so encouraging! I've had a go at the Pungent snippet and think that's a little closer. I'm trying to watch episodes, cap them, and listen out for everyone's style of dialogue, all in one go! I think once I've gone through both seasons I'll have to start all over again, and just listen.

And I wouldn't say it if I didn't mean it.

Thanks! I do appreciate it when you're honest and tell me what's wrong with a story - I think it makes me appreciate the postitive parts of the feedback even more.

(And, y'know, didn't want you to write more Dan/Casey fic. *g*)

I've had fun so far, maybe because I just wrote what I felt like, no pressure. I must start one of my challenge stories soon though - I'm writing an SV/YA crossover!! Lex/Will!!