You're a total darling! Especially as the ficlet was pretty poor! I just haven't got their voices like you have. (Though I actually don't mind the silly little all-dialogue snippet I wrote the other day, daft as it is). But you're so nice to me!
I'm going to go and get lots more coffee and then reread all your lovely comments.
I just haven't got their voices like you have. (Though I actually don't mind the silly little all-dialogue snippet I wrote the other day, daft as it is).
It's not down word-perfect, but you're not far off, Signe. If there's only a line or two that doesn't feel like Sorkinese, you're doing damn well. *g*
And I wouldn't say it if I didn't mean it. (And, y'know, didn't want you to write more Dan/Casey fic. *g*)
Aw, you're so encouraging! I've had a go at the Pungent snippet and think that's a little closer. I'm trying to watch episodes, cap them, and listen out for everyone's style of dialogue, all in one go! I think once I've gone through both seasons I'll have to start all over again, and just listen.
And I wouldn't say it if I didn't mean it.
Thanks! I do appreciate it when you're honest and tell me what's wrong with a story - I think it makes me appreciate the postitive parts of the feedback even more.
(And, y'know, didn't want you to write more Dan/Casey fic. *g*)
I've had fun so far, maybe because I just wrote what I felt like, no pressure. I must start one of my challenge stories soon though - I'm writing an SV/YA crossover!! Lex/Will!!
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I'm going to go and get lots more coffee and then reread all your lovely comments.
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It's not down word-perfect, but you're not far off, Signe. If there's only a line or two that doesn't feel like Sorkinese, you're doing damn well. *g*
And I wouldn't say it if I didn't mean it. (And, y'know, didn't want you to write more Dan/Casey fic. *g*)
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And I wouldn't say it if I didn't mean it.
Thanks! I do appreciate it when you're honest and tell me what's wrong with a story - I think it makes me appreciate the postitive parts of the feedback even more.
(And, y'know, didn't want you to write more Dan/Casey fic. *g*)
I've had fun so far, maybe because I just wrote what I felt like, no pressure. I must start one of my challenge stories soon though - I'm writing an SV/YA crossover!! Lex/Will!!
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OMG! What a combination. It's all 'pretentious stories that are all about *me*!' *giggles*
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Exactly! I think they'll be really cute together. Even though they're secretly lusting over Clark and Scout respectively.