2: sorted out a significant plot detail. (wasn't supposed to be significant, is why I hadn't sorted it earlier…)
3: okay so am I doing it where Rena goes offline for five minutes and therefore finds out when everyone else does, or where Rena hears the whole thing and can call in reinforcements Right Then? ugh. I planned route 1, since one of them needs to be thinking clearly the whole fic and I'd designated Rena, but route 2 kicks up Rena's personal investment, doesn't it? hm.
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Date: 2021-08-03 10:32 pm (UTC)3: okay so am I doing it where Rena goes offline for five minutes and therefore finds out when everyone else does, or where Rena hears the whole thing and can call in reinforcements Right Then? ugh. I planned route 1, since one of them needs to be thinking clearly the whole fic and I'd designated Rena, but route 2 kicks up Rena's personal investment, doesn't it? hm.