It wasn't particularly helpful feedback but I did *love* your Dan in this fic.
It made me totally giggle and beam! That's great feedback. *g*
Casey was also gorgeous and lost and pathetic (but with reason.... *gasp* it's something you don't see a lot of in my other fandoms i.e. 'why should I justify why this character would act like this? He just does, ok!')
Heh. I shouldn't be nasty, but yes, it doesn't happen in every fandom. *loves SN fandom* There's a ridiculously wonderful level of quality in this fandom.
So, yeah, Casey can come to Mexico too but somehow I don't think he'd be as good at shouting drunkenly at the tourists as Dan.
Well, no. But he can speak Spanish, so when you and Danny are too wasted to order more drinks, Casey can help. Plus, I think it'd make Danny a lot happier to have Casey around. They work better as a pair.
(Okay, now I'm picturing them drunkenly making out at the back of some grotty Mexican bar. ... Not a bad mental image. Not at all. *g*)
re-reading the paragraph above = sentence of doom. sorry.
Hee! Don't worry about it. I have quite a few sentences like that myself. (The ones where you look at them and feel you should apologise for butchering the English language like that.)
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Date: 2004-04-01 04:19 pm (UTC)It made me totally giggle and beam! That's great feedback. *g*
Casey was also gorgeous and lost and pathetic (but with reason.... *gasp* it's something you don't see a lot of in my other fandoms i.e. 'why should I justify why this character would act like this? He just does, ok!')
Heh. I shouldn't be nasty, but yes, it doesn't happen in every fandom. *loves SN fandom* There's a ridiculously wonderful level of quality in this fandom.
So, yeah, Casey can come to Mexico too but somehow I don't think he'd be as good at shouting drunkenly at the tourists as Dan.
Well, no. But he can speak Spanish, so when you and Danny are too wasted to order more drinks, Casey can help. Plus, I think it'd make Danny a lot happier to have Casey around. They work better as a pair.
(Okay, now I'm picturing them drunkenly making out at the back of some grotty Mexican bar. ... Not a bad mental image. Not at all. *g*)
re-reading the paragraph above = sentence of doom. sorry.
Hee! Don't worry about it. I have quite a few sentences like that myself. (The ones where you look at them and feel you should apologise for butchering the English language like that.)