I wanted to let you know that I think I'm on part 9 now, and I'm commenting before I forget to mention how brilliant this chapter (6) was, how you told it like Casey was drunk. I mean, he was drunk, but it's like you were on the see-saw with him... being drunk as well.
I'm going to give you intensive feedback eventually, just let me plunder through it, kay?
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Date: 2004-10-01 04:30 pm (UTC)I'm going to give you intensive feedback eventually, just let me plunder through it, kay?
Suffice it to say I'm loving it. Loving. It.