You are doing an absolutely *aces* job at "Show, Don't Tell" here.
It was great for the show and great for ratings, but Casey was always relieved when normal-Danny returned. He missed being able to laugh, and no-one made him laugh as much as Danny.
-- this *shows* us how much Casey loves Danny. (Yo, Casey! Clue bus for you!)
Dana talking about Natalie *shows* us what Danny is feeling, shows us one of the ways love looks.
And the kissing? Well, that *shows* me how much you rock! And it should *show* you how to reduce me to a puddle of pulsing goo.
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Date: 2004-05-01 09:03 am (UTC)It was great for the show and great for ratings, but Casey was always relieved when normal-Danny returned. He missed being able to laugh, and no-one made him laugh as much as Danny.
-- this *shows* us how much Casey loves Danny. (Yo, Casey! Clue bus for you!)
Dana talking about Natalie *shows* us what Danny is feeling, shows us one of the ways love looks.
And the kissing? Well, that *shows* me how much you rock! And it should *show* you how to reduce me to a puddle of pulsing goo.
*re-reads, pulses*