Huh. Sorkin fic.
Jun. 2nd, 2004 03:35 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
out_thereDo you ever have a fic that you're just not sure who it's about? I'm stuck with that at the moment. I started writing, but... it just couldn't decide if it Sam/Josh or Dan/Casey. (Does it help that at least I'm sure it's Sorkin?)
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He's sitting and he's thinking. Most of all, he's staring out the window, watching clouds flicker by. They seem… flawed isn't the right word, but it almost is. They seem flawed. From far away, they almost seem magical. Above him and below him, the clouds look white and fluffy; like snow, like cotton candy, like a hundred other clichés that spring to mind.
But when the plane flies through one, they're just damp, cold fog.
Sighing, he shifts in his chair, picking his cell phone out of his pocket. He's tempted to turn it on, to ignore the stewardesses' warnings. Not to make a call, but maybe to send a text message.
Am coming home.
Need, no… Want, no… Miss you.
Be there soon.
Of course, it's not as if he couldn't have said those things already. It's not as if he hasn't had the chance.
Within the last twenty-four hours, he's ignored the phone constantly. He ignored the high pitched ring so often that he ended up silencing it, just to get some sleep. He could have picked it up, could have said the words, but a day ago, half a day ago, a couple of hours ago, he wasn't sure of what he wanted to say.
Now he knows. He knows the words, he knows the sentences. He knows the clichés and the trite metaphors he'll use. Better than that, he knows why. He's still a little confused, he'd be lying through his teeth if he said he wasn't, but generally, he knows what he wants. It's been years since he's been able to nail that down with any clarity, it's been even longer since what he really wanted was just one person.
He shies away from thinking about it too much. He's *sure*, he's absolutely certain, but he's a little frightened of talking himself out of it. If he thinks about it too much, if he turns his words into a well-practiced speech, he might lose his nerve. That's why he hasn't called. This is the type of thing that has to be said in person, so it's clear that he means every word, every overused cliché.
Hopefully, sincerity will be enough to forgive his lack of originality, his lack of eloquence.
***
He's sitting and he's thinking. Most of all, he's staring out the window, watching clouds flicker by. They seem… flawed isn't the right word, but it almost is. They seem flawed. From far away, they almost seem magical. Above him and below him, the clouds look white and fluffy; like snow, like cotton candy, like a hundred other clichés that spring to mind.
But when the plane flies through one, they're just damp, cold fog.
Sighing, he shifts in his chair, picking his cell phone out of his pocket. He's tempted to turn it on, to ignore the stewardesses' warnings. Not to make a call, but maybe to send a text message.
Am coming home.
Need, no… Want, no… Miss you.
Be there soon.
Of course, it's not as if he couldn't have said those things already. It's not as if he hasn't had the chance.
Within the last twenty-four hours, he's ignored the phone constantly. He ignored the high pitched ring so often that he ended up silencing it, just to get some sleep. He could have picked it up, could have said the words, but a day ago, half a day ago, a couple of hours ago, he wasn't sure of what he wanted to say.
Now he knows. He knows the words, he knows the sentences. He knows the clichés and the trite metaphors he'll use. Better than that, he knows why. He's still a little confused, he'd be lying through his teeth if he said he wasn't, but generally, he knows what he wants. It's been years since he's been able to nail that down with any clarity, it's been even longer since what he really wanted was just one person.
He shies away from thinking about it too much. He's *sure*, he's absolutely certain, but he's a little frightened of talking himself out of it. If he thinks about it too much, if he turns his words into a well-practiced speech, he might lose his nerve. That's why he hasn't called. This is the type of thing that has to be said in person, so it's clear that he means every word, every overused cliché.
Hopefully, sincerity will be enough to forgive his lack of originality, his lack of eloquence.
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Date: 2004-06-01 10:43 pm (UTC)Now he knows. He knows the words, he knows the sentences. He knows the clichés and the trite metaphors he'll use. Better than that, he knows why.
I adore this line.
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Date: 2004-06-02 02:02 am (UTC)I hope you continue it, no matter who you choose... and you're right, it's definately Sorkin.
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Date: 2004-06-02 08:46 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2004-06-02 11:25 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2004-06-02 05:36 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2004-06-06 08:28 pm (UTC)The bit about cellphones and stewardesses made me smile and think of crabby Toby in the Pilot. Of course Sam would be too nice to do it!
Lovely, really, either/any way.
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