I've been reading my story back-logue so apologies for being behind.
But you've got such an appealing tone here. A really lovely style - must be a kind of economy of words or something that I'm attracted to... It's subtle, almost detached.
Can't help thinking I want more though - more of this story, more of how they get to this place... or something, I really don't know. Next time, perhaps? I'll keep an eye out for the next one. *g*
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Date: 2005-12-13 05:48 am (UTC)But you've got such an appealing tone here. A really lovely style - must be a kind of economy of words or something that I'm attracted to... It's subtle, almost detached.
Can't help thinking I want more though - more of this story, more of how they get to this place... or something, I really don't know. Next time, perhaps? I'll keep an eye out for the next one. *g*