I wanted to play with the idea of them both thinking of the other in terms of childhood ambitions -- ie. the things they wanted to do before they figured out the things they were actually good at.
That concept really resonates and makes the story richer. Nicely done. :)
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Date: 2006-03-02 03:17 pm (UTC)That concept really resonates and makes the story richer. Nicely done. :)