I'm particularly proud of those lines, actually. I love the idea of a "shringe" -- and the idea of Dan thinking like that, randomly making up words to describe how he sees the world -- and that half-chuckle is one of those things that Dana does so often in the series you almost don't notice it.
And Yay! for Dan making the list. Just the way it was supposed to be.
Exactly!
I can pretend to be patient for the next bit, but I'm not really.
Hee. Like I can pretend that I turned the computer on to work on the next bit, but I'm not. (I need to go to bed.)
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Date: 2006-10-01 11:51 am (UTC)I'm particularly proud of those lines, actually. I love the idea of a "shringe" -- and the idea of Dan thinking like that, randomly making up words to describe how he sees the world -- and that half-chuckle is one of those things that Dana does so often in the series you almost don't notice it.
And Yay! for Dan making the list. Just the way it was supposed to be.
Exactly!
I can pretend to be patient for the next bit, but I'm not really.
Hee. Like I can pretend that I turned the computer on to work on the next bit, but I'm not. (I need to go to bed.)