This was fantastic. The pacing was perfect, and Jack's thoughts were right on the money, I'm sure.
And I've found that in going back and reading through some other fics of yours (various fandoms; yay TW and SGA!) that you are very talented at describing body language and facial expression.
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Date: 2008-04-20 05:35 am (UTC)This was fantastic. The pacing was perfect, and Jack's thoughts were right on the money, I'm sure.
And I've found that in going back and reading through some other fics of yours (various fandoms; yay TW and SGA!) that you are very talented at describing body language and facial expression.
Well done! Off to search for more of your fic!!