Firstly, top!Ianto is always my favourite ever so there was no way I could have not been absurdly happy with this.
Secondly, I love how you combined incredibly hot porn with all the uncertainty and hesitation and pauses and breaks of a first time with someone. I mean, I think a lot of times, people write sex that just kind of happens and it's all passion and momentum and whatever, but I think this is so much more realistic and so much more believable. &hearts
Thirdly, this is also one of the most in-character sex scenes I've read in TW. I love how Jack's experience and confidence comes out in subtle ways and not like just 'oh, look at my amazing blowjob technique!' (Although I just want to say, whilst Jack's condom putting on trick is very sexy, I maintain that condoms taste disgusting and should never go near one's mouth.) Also, I love how Ianto is both clearly new at this but also willing to go with the flow and try new things.
Fourthly, dialogue, yes! They are totally people who would talk during sex! Like, actual talking versus fake 'ooh, you are so big, yeah put it in me etc' porno talk. &hearts!
So in conclusion, OMG &hearts!!!
Ok, so the bribe is definitely coming very soon. I'm working on it right now. I was away from photoshop when I had the time to work on it, and now I'm trying to figure out how to do covers. I think I did exactly one about five years ago so I'm kind of figuring out where things should go. Sorry!
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Date: 2008-04-02 04:45 pm (UTC)Firstly, top!Ianto is always my favourite ever so there was no way I could have not been absurdly happy with this.
Secondly, I love how you combined incredibly hot porn with all the uncertainty and hesitation and pauses and breaks of a first time with someone. I mean, I think a lot of times, people write sex that just kind of happens and it's all passion and momentum and whatever, but I think this is so much more realistic and so much more believable. &hearts
Thirdly, this is also one of the most in-character sex scenes I've read in TW. I love how Jack's experience and confidence comes out in subtle ways and not like just 'oh, look at my amazing blowjob technique!' (Although I just want to say, whilst Jack's condom putting on trick is very sexy, I maintain that condoms taste disgusting and should never go near one's mouth.) Also, I love how Ianto is both clearly new at this but also willing to go with the flow and try new things.
Fourthly, dialogue, yes! They are totally people who would talk during sex! Like, actual talking versus fake 'ooh, you are so big, yeah put it in me etc' porno talk. &hearts!
So in conclusion, OMG &hearts!!!
Ok, so the bribe is definitely coming very soon. I'm working on it right now. I was away from photoshop when I had the time to work on it, and now I'm trying to figure out how to do covers. I think I did exactly one about five years ago so I'm kind of figuring out where things should go. Sorry!