Ianto's voice is perfect, and Jack is awesome, and the sex is hot and sweet and tentative and tender and HOT, and, um, yes.
*does the Writer's Happy Dance* Thanks! I worried a lot about getting the tone of it right -- about getting that feeling of it being a little awkward, a little casual, but still incredibly hot -- and I'm glad the POV worked for you.
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Date: 2008-04-03 05:51 am (UTC)*does the Writer's Happy Dance* Thanks! I worried a lot about getting the tone of it right -- about getting that feeling of it being a little awkward, a little casual, but still incredibly hot -- and I'm glad the POV worked for you.