top!Ianto is always my favourite ever so there was no way I could have not been absurdly happy with this.
Top!Ianto is totally hot and kind of canon. I mean, he was the one making the first move with the stopwatch flirting, he was the one reaching to kiss Jack in 2.03, he was the one with the *handjob motions* in Adrift. Our Ianto may be quiet and appear conservative, but he's not the shy, bashful type.
I love how you combined incredibly hot porn with all the uncertainty and hesitation and pauses and breaks of a first time with someone.
*beams* Sometimes, it's great to read the escape fantasy porn where first times -- and times after that -- happen without anyone nearly toppling off the bed or getting a mouthful of hair when they try to kiss, and it's all romantic and steamy. Other times, it's nice to have the weird breaks and the awkward laughter that goes with it. So yay.
This is also one of the most in-character sex scenes I've read in TW.
*victory arms*
(Although I just want to say, whilst Jack's condom putting on trick is very sexy, I maintain that condoms taste disgusting and should never go near one's mouth.)
I will take your word on the condom thing -- yeah, 27, and no experience with condoms: this is my so-not-outrageous life *g* -- but I stand by the idea that Jack would cope with the bad taste for the sake of the effect.
Or, alternatively, we can handwave and pretend that Jack time-travels with an almighty supply of 51st century condoms that all taste like Cadbury's chocolate.
Fourthly, dialogue, yes! They are totally people who would talk during sex! Like, actual talking versus fake 'ooh, you are so big, yeah put it in me etc' porno talk. ♥!
*giggles* Who the hell talks like that in sex? Honestly? I mean, it's odd everyday type "You're on my hair" and meaningless quips in bed. I'm assuming it's a most-people thing, and not just a me-thing, and that most people don't talk porn in bed. (I mean, I never have. Well, I've possibly related in detail an idea for a slash porn scene, but that's the closest to dirty talk I've ever got.)
And Jack and Ianto... just wouldn't stay quiet. I find it ridiculous that the biggest manwhore I've ever tried to write really wants to spend more time telling stories and charming people than getting naked. It's downright contrary.
Also, yay bribe! Although I was only half-serious when I demanded it, so you can be let off the hook if you want. (Although, really? I want it. I so want it!)
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Date: 2008-04-03 06:56 am (UTC)top!Ianto is always my favourite ever so there was no way I could have not been absurdly happy with this.
Top!Ianto is totally hot and kind of canon. I mean, he was the one making the first move with the stopwatch flirting, he was the one reaching to kiss Jack in 2.03, he was the one with the *handjob motions* in Adrift. Our Ianto may be quiet and appear conservative, but he's not the shy, bashful type.
I love how you combined incredibly hot porn with all the uncertainty and hesitation and pauses and breaks of a first time with someone.
*beams* Sometimes, it's great to read the escape fantasy porn where first times -- and times after that -- happen without anyone nearly toppling off the bed or getting a mouthful of hair when they try to kiss, and it's all romantic and steamy. Other times, it's nice to have the weird breaks and the awkward laughter that goes with it. So yay.
This is also one of the most in-character sex scenes I've read in TW.
*victory arms*
(Although I just want to say, whilst Jack's condom putting on trick is very sexy, I maintain that condoms taste disgusting and should never go near one's mouth.)
I will take your word on the condom thing -- yeah, 27, and no experience with condoms: this is my so-not-outrageous life *g* -- but I stand by the idea that Jack would cope with the bad taste for the sake of the effect.
Or, alternatively, we can handwave and pretend that Jack time-travels with an almighty supply of 51st century condoms that all taste like Cadbury's chocolate.
Fourthly, dialogue, yes! They are totally people who would talk during sex! Like, actual talking versus fake 'ooh, you are so big, yeah put it in me etc' porno talk. ♥!
*giggles* Who the hell talks like that in sex? Honestly? I mean, it's odd everyday type "You're on my hair" and meaningless quips in bed. I'm assuming it's a most-people thing, and not just a me-thing, and that most people don't talk porn in bed. (I mean, I never have. Well, I've possibly related in detail an idea for a slash porn scene, but that's the closest to dirty talk I've ever got.)
And Jack and Ianto... just wouldn't stay quiet. I find it ridiculous that the biggest manwhore I've ever tried to write really wants to spend more time telling stories and charming people than getting naked. It's downright contrary.
Also, yay bribe! Although I was only half-serious when I demanded it, so you can be let off the hook if you want. (Although, really? I want it. I so want it!)