It's a little amazing, but it occured to me after I posted that despite this being a self-indulgent excuse-for-porn story, there actually isn't any porn in the second half. And the porn of the first half... well, a surprising amount of it is actually there for the plot. *laughs*

I just skimmed the bits of this you posted earlier because of the consent issues

That is fair enough. When I had to write the CCTV scenes (scenes of Jack watching the CCTV, because while I knew they were happening, I'd kind of forgotten to write it into the story), I felt so incredibly sleazy and terrible for doing that to Ianto. So you have permission to skim, especially since I'm about to head for bed with the phrase "Jack, searching out Ianto out of curiosity and possessiveness, and finding himself completely smitten." which totally sums up Jack's motivation here.