I love the suspense you built through the story - I didn't really doubt that they'd get Ianto out, but I still felt doubtful, if that makes sense.
I'm so glad it worked! I mean, it's Ianto and the team, they're going to save the day, but if there's no sense of urgency or danger, it's a boring story to read.
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Date: 2008-07-21 01:08 am (UTC)I'm so glad it worked! I mean, it's Ianto and the team, they're going to save the day, but if there's no sense of urgency or danger, it's a boring story to read.
thank you!