Only gave it a really quick read through last night since it was late and I had to go to bed, and basically only skimmed through to read the bits that I've missed. OMG, hadn't realised this thing was so long! And I think we went through this before when you first started it about how I was wondering "what if Sherlock's really experienced and good in bed?" and you basically read my mind and wrote this!! Which is waaaay better than what I initially thought possible and wheee!!

Poor John, being totally taken by surprise. And Mycroft!! He totally didn't see it coming either!

Though... that bit about their mum's funeral, I'm taking that you've did a bit of 'this is not the droid you're looking for' hand-waving? Since I got the impression that their mum is still alive in ep 1...

Anyway, hope this all makes sense. Shit, I need to go to sleep. Early morning tomorrow, damn me for agreeing to an interview for a job I quite possibly don't want.