I'll try and get at least one section done as quickly as I can, but I'm going out this evening, and I was just too tired this morning to get up early and do a section (today is going to take a lot of caffeine - I stayed up way too late, making screencaps....).
I think the third one needs some reference to Josh's father to explain that he's going over to his funeral.
Yes. I guessed, largely from the date, but it would be much better included. The other two I can't comment on without rereading, and I've not got that long before work.
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Date: 2003-10-22 12:10 am (UTC)I think the third one needs some reference to Josh's father to explain that he's going over to his funeral.
Yes. I guessed, largely from the date, but it would be much better included. The other two I can't comment on without rereading, and I've not got that long before work.