Random betaish things:

[out_there]

- Apparently, I have quite a thing for Dan's voice. (Can you blame me?)

- My tenses? Are getting better. They're not straying quite as wildly as before.

- I am, however, comma-crazy. Is there a place, in a sentence, where I could possibly add a few commas? I'll add them.

- I now have a dislike for the word world. I know what I mean, but I can't think of a better word for it. It's okay, because I have time, and an impressive online thesaurus, on my side.

- You know you've been editing your fic for too long when the beta-readers comments make you crack up. "Dan’s dialogue gets kind of crazy" made me giggle like a loon. I'm just imagining lines of text running around, yelling "We're craaaazy!".

(It's almost like one of those irritating TV ads. "Today only, there's a sale on Dan's dialogue. Prices are low, it's got to go. It's crazy!" Okay, possibly, this is only amusing inside *my* head. *g*)


Mind you, regardless of how unappreciative I sound, shoshannagold and meadowlion rocked my world. Those babes did great betas!