Thank you. It was actually a line that was bugging me as I thought the repitition might be too much, so I ended up changing it a little (Casey decided that if he was going to be that repetitive, this needed to be his last beer.). Huh. Interesting that a line that bothered me actually worked for someone else.
I like Casey reflecting on Dan's reactions - it really reveals how much he cares.
Yeah, and how he doesn't realise how deeply he cares for Dan. *g*
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Date: 2004-09-30 03:38 am (UTC)Thank you. It was actually a line that was bugging me as I thought the repitition might be too much, so I ended up changing it a little (Casey decided that if he was going to be that repetitive, this needed to be his last beer.). Huh. Interesting that a line that bothered me actually worked for someone else.
I like Casey reflecting on Dan's reactions - it really reveals how much he cares.
Yeah, and how he doesn't realise how deeply he cares for Dan. *g*