And a sweet slashy ending! *bounces*

Total schmoop!

And, um, awkward phrasing. Try moving the then to the start.

I just re-read that phrase and cringed. See, that's why I don't write dialogue!

*snerk* I like that. That Casey and Danny both know how annoyed Dan would be. It's just... sweet that they know that and accept that stuff.

I'm glad you liked that, as it's the way I see them. I think Dan would mean well, but that he just wouldn't deal well with being kept waiting. But they've the kind of friendship that just accepts things like that.

Bwahahahahaa! Oh, I love the cheese jokes.

Not too obvious then? I imagine Casey bringing it up whenever it even vaguely fits the conversation....

*snerk* The amusing thing is that sometimes it is visible.

I think it is with both of them. And they both show their emotions a lot in their eyes. Which is one of the things I love about them.

Now I've got Danny in my head. Saying that he would tear down Rebecca's "wall of pain", that it was made of bricks and mortar and the third thing.

I thought I'd be a tiny bit subtle and not mention the non-existent third thing! *g*

I just can't believe you made me write something so totally, irredeemably schmoopy! About cupcakes! *is embarrassed*