WW fic: The Right Word

[out_there]

You know, my knowledge of HTML is so pathetic that I tend to be proud of getting a very basic page working (even if I did use MSFrontPage to get it). Considering I passed computing systems (with C+ coding), I know it's just a case of effort. I'm just too lazy to work out how to do it.

Here is The Right Word which was vastly improved by both kaneko and oxoniensis. Thanks for pointing out things like internal logic, flow, and the phrases that Sam would have verbally bitch-slapped me for using.

ETA: You see the pretty pic at the top? That was my birthday present from oxoniensis! *bg*

Comments

Re: "there's like a six foot painting on the wall of teddy roosevelt."

[out-there.livejournal.com]

Thanks! *g*

One of the things that really amused me was the bad grammar/dodgy phrases that my beta's picked up on. (Let's just say that I was one step off "highly unique"... *g*)

Personaly, I'm a little intimidated of writing Sam for this reason. He's a better writer than I am, and I hate the idea of writing a fic that's filled with mistakes that Sam wouldn't make. (Toby, I wouldn't even attempt. At least Sam has similar flaws to me, too much imagery and description, too little punctuation and grammatically correct sentences... *g*)