WW fic: The Right Word

[out_there]

You know, my knowledge of HTML is so pathetic that I tend to be proud of getting a very basic page working (even if I did use MSFrontPage to get it). Considering I passed computing systems (with C+ coding), I know it's just a case of effort. I'm just too lazy to work out how to do it.

Here is The Right Word which was vastly improved by both kaneko and oxoniensis. Thanks for pointing out things like internal logic, flow, and the phrases that Sam would have verbally bitch-slapped me for using.

ETA: You see the pretty pic at the top? That was my birthday present from oxoniensis! *bg*

Comments

[oxoniensis.livejournal.com]

I'm going to go and read the finished version in a minute, but just to say, I think I'd better do a bit more work on the cover. All the text across Sam's face, and the background text has blured on uploading. I'll see if I can redo it, and make it clearer. No guarentees, as I'm a beginner at this, but I'll do my best.

[out-there.livejournal.com]

Feel free. (I need to fix up the file anyway - tiny tense typo I spotted last night. Serves me right for changing it after it was beta'd... *g*)

[out-there.livejournal.com]

Although, looking at it from the work PC, I can see what you mean. At home, it loads very well (and looks great! *g*)...

Maybe it's a monitor thing.

[oxoniensis.livejournal.com]

At home, it loads very well

Oh good! It may just be my browser then. But as it's dodgy on your work PC too, I think I'd still better try to sharpen it up. It might not be until the weekend though - I've a busy week ahead.